Book 6: Mt. Rainier
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OPENS AUGUST 3, 2026
Outline | 100%
Outline
- I sketch in broad strokes, often drawing the story (with words) on large sheets of paper.
- The outline looks like a tangled mess until I put it into linear, prose form.
First Draft | 100%
First Draft
The first draft is the most challenging and time-demanding phase of the process. Once I get the first draft completed, things start to speed up. Here are a few highlights from my experience writing the first draft:
- While writing a scene about 75% into the book, the characters actually made me cry. I'm going to really miss Jake, Wes, and Amber when I complete this series.
- I never set out knowing what Jake is struggling with or working through. A lot of authors need to know this before they start a book, because that need often drives the story. During this process, I've grown to accept that my process is a bit different, and that the geography of each park and the clues drive the story forward.
- Wes continues to make me laugh out loud while I'm writing. This can be embarrassing if I'm writing in a public place. ;)
First Edit | 100%
First Edit (AKA The Big Edit)
During the first edit, I work with one to two edit partners who read the text and give me feedback. In the second edit, I'm focused on story-level elements: continuity with the other books, important clues, and adding character emotion during dialogue. I love this stage, and it tends to go quickly. This is also where I often have to make the hard decision to cut certain scenes or significantly shorten scenes.
- This first edit was more demanding than expected. I had perhaps my most-detailed outline, but I just had too many story elements. Some of those ideas I'll have to cut. I'll incorporate other into future books.
- Wes had made me laugh out loud multiple times. Thankfully, most of the time I've been writing at home.
- During this stage, I have two editing companions who have been reviewing the story and leaving comments that will help guide my second edit.
2nd Edit | Developmental Edit | 100%
Second Edit - Developmental Edit
In this stage, I review the feedback from my edit team, and work to further focus the story.
I'll be cutting out scenes that don't contribute to the core story. I'll also do a deep dive on cause and effect.
This means that we have a clear idea of what Jake is experiencing, feeling about that experience, and how he decides to respond. Finally, I'll be looking for continuity issues: that the clues clearly work, times and dates are correct, and that I foreshadow events and decisions so that they make sense and feel natural to the reader.
3rd Edit | Speed Edit | 100%
Third Edit - Speed Edit
In this stage, I'll be quickly (in 1-2 days) reading through the book to identify any places where the cause/effect elements of the story are not working or might cause confusion. In addition to fixing these elements, I'll be taking notes on specific places in the manuscript that I want to revisit to: create active attribution where there are now just "talking heads," bring out the emotional responses of the characters, tighten long descriptions, and edit clunky sentences.
4th Edit | Pre-Beta Edit | 100%
Fourth Edit - Pre-Beta Edit
I'll be working through a specific set of edits to make the copy ready and readable for my beta team.
Beta Interior and Cover Formatting - 100%
Beta Interior and Cover Formatting
This takes me most of one day. I use a software called Vellum to format the interior and Photoshop to format the cover. I also do some final typo check. My beta versions contain numerous mistakes. However, I try to make it as readable as possible. You don't want simple errors to distract from the reading experience.
Illustration | 0%
Illustration
I now collaborate with my daughter on the illustrations. We draw them using the pencil and watercolor tools in Adobe Fresco. We'll be working on these throughout the writing process.
Proofreader Edits | 0%
Proofreader Edits
I have a small team who I work with to proofread the books. This is not my beta reader team. In fact, I ask my beta readers to not do any proofreading (because I want to hear about their experience of the story). The proof team is sending me edits at the same time as the beta team.
Mailing Presale Copies | 0%
Mailing Presale Copies
Published to Amazon | 0%
Published to Amazon
After all the presale copies are in the mail, I'll hit the publish button on Amazon. This can take their systems anywhere from 12-72 for the books to become available online.
